Changes between Version 8 and Version 9 of SaliInstallationServer

Timestamp:

02/13/13 14:41:02 (7 years ago)

Author:

bas

Comment:

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SaliInstallationServer

@@ -64 +64 @@
 To setup a dynamic PXE environment visit our project [https://oss.trac.surfsara.nl/pxeconfig pxeconfig]
 
-If you have setup you PXE environment you copy the example file to the `pxelinux.cfg` directory in your `tftp` root.
+If you have setup your PXE environment, copy the example file to the `pxelinux.cfg` directory in your `tftp` root.
 {{{
 # cd /var/tmp/sali-1.5.8/examples
@@ -70 +70 @@
 }}}
 
-The default action of the `default.sali_test` is to start a SALI rescue shell:
+The default action of the `default.sali_test` is starting a SALI rescue shell:
 {{{
 # pxeconfig <nodename> -f default.sali_test
@@ -114 +114 @@
 }}}
 
-After you have installed SALI you must copy a couple of files by hand
+After you have installed SALI you have to install some files manually:
 {{{
 # cd /var/tmp/sali-1.5.8